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3:15 AM – August 8, 2009

August 9, 2009 by openchannel 5 Comments

I decided to share this 3:15 Experiment poem not because its one of my favourites or for its fine literary quality, but because it is such 3:15 language… that and I don’t remember writing it!

I remember writing, I recall my hand moving by some force, but I don’t recall any of these words (and some I’ve had to interpret as they were illegible), where they came from, or to what they were referring – other than the fact that my husband went bike-camping on Mayne Island and saw views of islands.

This is something that continually fascinates me about the experiment, that I could actually physically write, but not be conscious while doing it.

August, 8, 2009
Vancouver, BC

I have frozen in this
finite heat.  the islands,
the islands have mass and must wait.
temptation.  the islands have both the
call and response.  we were there.
come.

Witnesses may always refuse –
then we’re stuck hungrily
hiring the land.

I started on land & ended on air
I swallowed the clues
ingested     as my own DNA

The island lines up
my timing near-perfect

Bring her in.  Bring them
all in.
time for a game
a test of time.

milquetoast

The pieces are mulled over
the den gone.  Civilized votes any
confidence
a circular witness : a time beast

The water comes.  The room is
occupied.  We have the presence
of salt to slow them down.

And eyes on the backs
of our heads.

My favourite thing about it is the random word “milquetoast” that appears in the middle of the poem. In my journal I had started a new page and written that at the top, then drew a line underneath it.

You can still JOIN in the madness… there are 20 days left to participate in the 3:15 Experiment.

The 2nd Official 3:15 Experiment Anthology
The 2nd Official 3:15 Experiment Anthology

HOW TO DO THE 3:15 EXPERIMENT:

* Begin at 3:15 AM on August 1st (so set your alarms on JULY 31) . Continue each day until August 31.
* You may write any length, style, form, content, voice, rhythm, etc.
* DO NOT EDIT your work. This is raw stuff, baby. That’s part of the experiment. You are welcome to edit, collage, break apart the poems later for whatever purpose you choose, but please SHARE THE RAW STUFF with the rest of the group here or on the website once the experiment is over.
* (Optional) Do not read what you have written until the month is over, except to skim the work to make sure everything is legible.

TIPS: Do not use a felt tip pen unless you don’t care about ink stains on your bed. Many a poet has fallen asleep in the middle of writing. If you can help it, don’t even get out of bed! The point is to ride that dream state, that precarious point between sleeping and waking and sleeping.

(This is the first year I have broken the “optional” rule and shared poems during the month. )

Filed Under: Archived Blog, poetry, The 3:15 Experiment, writing exercises Tagged With: collaborative poetry, poetry, poetry train, The 3:15 Experiment, writing exercise

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  1. Michelle Johnson says

    August 9, 2009 at 11:57 pm

    I really like and appreciate the rawness in this poem. It makes absolutely no sense but broken down can mean many things. I love the word milquetoast. I can see a new poem forming from that one word. I’d love to be brave enough to wake at 3:15 so as to write a poem. Maybe someday… Have a great day.

    Reply
    • openchannel says

      August 15, 2009 at 1:43 pm

      Thanks, Michelle. I think that’s the reason it’s becoming one of my favourite 3:15’s from this season. It’s like a dream-list of little profundities.

      Reply
  2. April Belle says

    August 10, 2009 at 5:56 am

    Loved the randomness and intriguing imagery. I could definitely read more – look forward to seeing additional 3:15 experiments!

    (found your site via the poetry train…)

    Reply
  3. moorebloglife says

    August 10, 2009 at 9:05 am

    This is quite interesting although it is not my style it kept me totally engaged.
    TY
    mine is here
    https://www.moorebloglife.com/2009/08/10/poetry-train-40/

    Reply
  4. gautami tripathy says

    August 12, 2009 at 1:54 am

    I gotta do this 3:15 Am experiments. It is so inspiring.

    Good to see you back with such a great post!

    fired blue vase

    Reply

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