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56 Flavours:Chapter 7

July 6, 2009 by openchannel 2 Comments

Untrained I

The last time she had shopped there she had run into a woman she thought she knew. Only she didn’t. When she politely moved away after realizing her mistake, the woman followed her, asking her so what do you do? She drew a blank. There was a job she had, a husband she lived with, a cat she fed, a mother she should call. I’m in transition, she finally said, picking out a $9 package of teriyaki salmon. She was a terrible shopper. She never came for what she got or got what she came for. Ingredients slipped her mind. Instant gratification took over like swarms of bees. What do YOU do, she asked in return. It was the obvious thing to do. I train trainers. Train trainers. I train people how to train people. Well she supposed someone had to. Train people. At the counter, paying for her groceries, she pictured untrained passengers swaying dangerously from the top of the caboose, admiring the crows as they headed east at sunset.

Filed Under: 56 Flavours, Archived Blog, flash fiction Tagged With: chapter post, flash fiction, short fiction, train

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  1. Michelle Johnson says

    July 7, 2009 at 1:47 am

    What an enjoyable read. I can relate to that woman’s transition. Your ending was great. Have a nice day.

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  2. openchannel says

    July 8, 2009 at 6:55 am

    yeah… i’ve been in transition my whole life. 🙂

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