Storyteller
CONGRATULATIONS!
The winners from Tuesday’s RenovaLaunch Party are:
A copy of Telling Tales (donated by Tod McCoy):
A copy of Witches, Stitches, and Bitches
(donated by Shannon Page):
A copy of Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror:
$25 Amazon Gift Certificate:
Thanks for playing, everyone! And much gratitude for your support.
I will be emailing you individually soon. dd
Thanks for stopping by. There’s so much I want to share, I don’t even know where to start! So, before we get to the food and entertainment and party games, how about I start with what we’re celebrating?
First off, we are celebrating the official launch of Ondelle of Grioth, the third book in my Faerie Tales from the White Forest series, which Cassandra Rose Clarke called “A charming, magical journey.” (check out her books if you haven’t already, because she is all kinds of fun.)
You may buy copies HERE (or order through your Local Indie Bookstore)
Second, the launch of this site. I’m still getting used to the new digs, working out kinks, etc, but it’s growing on me. And I like that it’s uniquely mine. Many thanks to Kelsye Nelson for branding me (ouch!).
Next, I’d like to thank the TEAM behind the book, for without them there would be a lot less awesome in the world. (a few of them have even added to the giveaway pile today).
Big, Mushy Thanks to:
Tod McCoy
(editor and publisher) – Oh, look, he’s already got a drink.
Shannon Page
(copy editor – and obviously Super Hero)
Chris Fink-Jensen (cover typography)
Julie Fain (cover art)
Alison Woodward (maps and inner graphics)
Okay, I know this is why you’re REALLY here. And we have some super giveaways for you, including:
$25 Amazon Gift Certificate
A copy of Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror
A copy of Witches, Stitches, and Bitches (donated by Shannon)
A copy of Telling Tales (donated by Tod)
In order to win, I’m not going to tell you to like me on Facebook or follow me Twitter (or even this blog) to score points. Of course, if you want to do those things, I’m happy and grateful. I really and truly am. Feel free to follow me anywhere (well, um, almost anywhere).
Instead, here’s how you can earn points. For each one of these you get your name in a draw:
(giveaway goes until 5 pm TOMORROW, April 16
for those who like to be fashionably late or are finishing their taxes)
AND, if you’re interested in winning a signed print copy of Ondelle of Grioth, you have until Friday, April 18 over at 4 AM Writer. (and follow her blog because Kate is lovely)
I created a little party game just for the fun of it, and when it’s all put together, it forms a bit of a poem (it IS National Poetry Month after all).
Tell us these four things and feel free to be creative):
Your Element
Your Super Power
Your Magical Name/Title
The last line you wrote
(if you are a writer, if not a writer, the last line you read)
HERE’s MINE:
Seawater
finds lost things
Tree Whisperer
I didn’t know which scared me more:
that I’d wake up the next day and she’d still be there,
or that I’d wake up and she’d be gone.
And now it’s time to Eat, Drink, and Be Merry!
FIVE MINUTE CHOCOLATE MUG CAKE
(works just fine with gluten free flour and less sugar)
FIVE MINUTE ICE CREAM
(can add yoghurt, too, and skip sugar)
And Shannon sent us a drink:
Kir Royale
2TBS creme de cassis
1 glass champagne or prosecco
pour cassis into glass of champagne.
Enjoy!
(artwork by Gizem Vural)I didn’t think I had a weekly workout this week because I have so many book launch things going on (yay), but then a friend of mine asked if I had an exercise she could use for middle school students that involved CREATING SUSPENSE.
I realized I hadn’t done much work on suspense, with middle school or adult students, so I decided to include the exercise I came up with here.
Yes, this is geared towards 7th graders, but I think the lesson works for adult-types, too.
suspense is all about tension and about what you do know vs. what you don’t know
Suppose a girl wrote a hideously embarrassing love note to a boy, with no intention of ever giving it to him. But her best friend, thinking she’s being super helpful, sticks it in his mailbox late one night. The next day, when the girl finds out, she realizes she MUST GET THAT LETTER BACK!
Which one of these creates the most suspense:
1) She calls up the boy’s parents, tells them of the mistake, and asks if they can tear up the letter.
2) She fakes being sick so she can stay home from school, then after her parents leave for work, she sneaks over to the boys house to steal the letter back from his mailbox.
Obviously, #2, but why? Because the tension is drawn out, the stakes get higher, and there’s more “waiting to see what happens.” We know less, but our minds fill in what could happen, which is both embarrassment and trouble. (Embarrassment is probably one of the things readers will sympathize the most. God how we hate to be embarrassed.)
We know the girl’s parents can call home any minute, but we don’t know if and when they will. We know the girl could get caught rifling through the mailbox and have to explain herself. But we don’t even know if anyone will be home at the boy’s house. There’s suspense around the question of Will She Get Caught?
Let’s suppose she chooses #2, fakes an illness, and sneaks over to the boys house, but JUST as she gets there, his mother takes in the mail. The girl sneaks up to a window and sees his Mom place it on the kitchen table and GO UPSTAIRS. She notices the window is open. Not knowing how much time she has, she decides to sneak in the window and get that letter back!
If the girl rushes in, grabs the letter, and runs home with no problem, the potential suspense is completely deflated. We didn’t feel the danger in our bones, which is where we want it to reach. Let’s see if we can really draw out the tension…
What does the girl hear, see, smell, feel/physically experience, or even taste, if it comes up, that will assist in building the tension in this scene? How can you, as a writer, TURN IT UP A NOTCH?
Examples:
The window squeaks as she opens it
The girl gets stuck in the window
The girl drops the letter behind the piano, it’s dusty, and it makes her sneeze
The girl smells fresh bakes cookies, and can’t resist grabbing one, only to pull the entire batch onto the floor
The doorbell rings and the mom comes downstairs to get it while the girl is in the kitchen
The girl hides behind the sofa while the mom chats at the door
YOUR WORKOUT
Pick a scene in which your character must do something illicit or sneaky or just needs to get away with something. A scene in which you want to create tension (could be humorous or frightening). Something she doesn’t want anyone else to know about. Could be anything from having a secret cigarette in the garage to stealing the enemies secret plans. It just needs to have something with stakes. Maybe the mother promised her daughter she’d quit smoking after her grandmother died of lung cancer.
1) SET YOUR TIMER for 7-10 minutes.
Write a series/list of WHAT IF statements of ways to either surprise your protagonist, get in her way, up the stakes, or otherwise threaten to expose her.
What if she drops the cigarette and lights something on fire in the garage?
What if she hears the daughter call her name from inside the house?
What if she gets a tickle in her throat and starts to cough?
Etc.
Just keep adding things that may even PILE UP later on. She could accidentally light something on fire and THEN hear her daughter’s voice. Or vice versa.
Write without stopping, crossing out, rereading, or editing.
Circle the ones that you really like.
2) SET YOUR TIMER for 10-12 minutes.
Start with the line: In this scene, what my character doesn’t know is…
See where this idea takes you. Write without stopping, crossing out, rereading, or editing.
3) SET YOUR TIMER for 12-15 minutes.
Now write the scene! Using a combination of idea from part one and two.
Write without stopping, crossing out, rereading, or editing.
And have a great week!